Wednesday, October 19, 2011

C- Unacceptable! Please Re-do the assignment, I mean, doodle.

Your Crit- should you choose to accept it...
What was going on Kelly? this drawing was all kinds of wonky last night.
You could say it's only the third drawing you have done on your Cintiq- and you are still not used to it. Perhaps you are sitting too close, zooming in too much and not out enough. AND your chair is too low. 

BUT those would all be excuses. No excuses for bad anatomy- not for you.

Please read comments and fix your work .

Much better! I wish you had taken this much time last night to complete your doodle before posting. Remember - needing art for your blog is not a reason for bad art. Whatever you put out there - it's got your name on it.

Her head is still a little big- but it's just a doodle.

Now get back to work.


atlanticmo said...

I don't know. I liked the "wonky" one, crazy arm and all. It had a lot of verve.
I would have given it an "A".

lil kim said...

cool post Kelly, I learn a lot from you.

Christina Rodriguez said...

Wow, I'd hate to see how you'd crit MY work!

Eric Barclay said...

I thought I was tough on me but not as tough as you are on you. :-)

Wonderful doodle. Jane Austen could only be better with Wookies.

Jim Hill said...

Glad you fixed the arm. I like the lollipop head though, gives it a manga-ish spin in a very subtle way. You know, for the kids.

Awesome work. Both the original and the insight into your self-crit. It's a great lesson for all of us worshipping at your feet. Figuratively.

Now, please do the rest of the Star Wars/Austen mash-up. Scruffy Nerf-herders and walking carpets need some pseudo Victorian love.

melinda beavers said...

As per Christina Rodriguez… TOTALLY!
We are all our own toughest critiques.
I understand the need and drive to be better… but you're taking it to a whole new level here!

Awesome post Kelly - fun doodle!

Don Hudson said...

Nice crit.